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I'm getting back into drawing KH =w=
So here's Namine~ I lined and colored a scene from this sketch dump:
I'm going to try finishing the rest of the sketches on that page soon x3
Also, possibly expect a few Final Fantasy XIII-2 art. I just recently got it and I love it *u*
Namine (c) Square Enix
So here's Namine~ I lined and colored a scene from this sketch dump:
I'm going to try finishing the rest of the sketches on that page soon x3
Also, possibly expect a few Final Fantasy XIII-2 art. I just recently got it and I love it *u*
Namine (c) Square Enix
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Vision Originality Technique ImpactHey there! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title=" (Smile)"/> So, a brief introduction, I'm going around critiquing people's photos, trying to give out my opinion and hopefully help them improve. I'm not the greatest artist myself, but I do know how to critique pieces of work.So, I quite like the ideals in this picture. I like the way you colored it, and I like how she's "shattering".
Howver, the flaws I see in this picture are as follows:
Her face. It's to... Square. Namine has a very feminine, and rounded face. In this, her face is flat, and generally, "un-Namne like".
Also, her skirt shattering. Maybe you could've draw a bit of her legs before they shattered?
Amd her hair, it just... Maybe if there were stands and locks of hair flying around it would've added to the effect.
Overall, I do like the picture, but there could have been improvements. : /
Keep trying! Practice DOES make perfect, or something relatively close to it! :')